I commute often on the bus between NYC and Providence RI.

It is a four hour ride that I use in a variety of ways, sleep, work, read, listen to music, and sometimes I learn lessons.

On one trip the young woman sitting next to me showed me how to access a lot of the features on my new iPhone. The best tip was the flash light 😉

On another trip a tractor trailer truck driver was trying to run us of the road. Resulting in the truck driver pointing a gun at our bus driver. I turned that incident into an art piece :-{

The other day a young man sat next me and we began to chat. He is a writer his current job is writing text for high profile websites, so I showed him mine.

He appreciated in my work YAY!
He went on to share knowledge from his job. I have written to much. I went on to explain the information I was trying to share.

I know but get the app Hemingway Editor.

You drop your text into the app. Via color coding it will let you know where you document is difficult to read and why.

IT WAS A GREAT TIP 😉